This is really great work, but what spoils it for me is the repetative nature of the city. Reminds me of that planet in Star Wars Phantom Menace. The Bryster

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...