Forum: Writers


Subject: Poetry Challenge V ...A Dad at forty-six

tjames opened this issue on Dec 12, 2002 ยท 10 posts


tjames posted Sat, 21 December 2002 at 4:55 PM

Alright Jon sn-sn-sn I thin' you got a twofer on the form mon. A little better on the volta. What was the problem? I say 8 and 4 and 2. Shakespearean sonnet in iambic pentemeter. This form does tend to the introspective view.