Forum: Writers


Subject: Merry Christmas frum PP!!!! Shopping Poem /Story

PPsphere opened this issue on Dec 18, 2002 ยท 14 posts


tjames posted Sat, 21 December 2002 at 8:02 PM

Does that mean you're in the wilderness on the sonnet. A true poet can dance in another ball park...The LA tossed bs salad called rap is a form. Try another stage and grow bigger. Ya want a love song show us a serenade. Ya want to talk about leavin' your woman show us an aubade or a nocturne c'mon PP the dig is in don't show us ribs show us meat. jstro had trouble with the sonnet but wore it well. Cal slipped a bit but gave good digs now pick up the glove and move your sleepy legs.