See now the rhyme on the sceond line is suppose to be the same word the words leading up to it are changed so the line is diminished. It's a repeating line at the head of each stanza. It would be more like: Every time I see you we have to fight; A line Ever time I'm with you just have to fight; A' line Never can be near you just can't stand the sight. a line No matter what I tried the coda seemed dissonant maybe because the "preamble" was down with the turn at the volta the coda had to be upbeat? It just didn't sound right. Not a bad poem, but you see the rub?