jwhitham opened this issue on Jan 05, 2003 ยท 8 posts
jaywat posted Sun, 05 January 2003 at 6:36 PM
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Nice image. Personally I like the way her hair flows. It looks like it's moving in the wind. Perhaps you could make further suggestion of that by leaning those grasses on the right hand side towards the right as well. I also like the simplicity of the dress. It doesn't detract from the rest of the image. Perhaps consider a subtle pastel red or something if you are looking to bring her out more. Other than that, if you were looking for suggestions on how to enhance the image further, I would think about adding more foreground vegetation so that it doesn't look quite so flat. And perhaps reducing the scale of the texture/bumps on the foreground rock. The texture looks fine for sandstone type rocks, but the texturing on the landscape in the background suggests to me that the local rock here is a more sedimentary and finely textured rock ;) My tuppence worth. HIH. -- Jason