heya; i like darkness. :) but i'd have to say, this isn't dark enough. the campfire should be lighting up a circle on the ground around it. (try a spotlight straight down?) and it should be lighting the figure more from the bottom; this seems kinda front-lit. also i think the light should be more orange-coloured. go crazy and turn off all the lights except one spotlight and see what you get. yeah, probably WAY too dark, but see what you can do with it; don't be afraid to be too dark before you've seen what it looks like.