Dave, may I suggest something about the hands? If she is making a fist, then the fingers should be squeezed together and there should be no gaps between them. (I know the default fist position is like this is Poser, I worked on this once myself. I had to move the fingers closer together.) Or maybe she's doing the "I'm gonna strangle him" move? Then maybe the fingers should be more extended and curved in a claw-like way. I don't know how to explain it, sorry. Her expression is great, it really shows how angry she is. Sue