First P5 render? I remember my first P4 render way back when, and it looked nowhere near as good as this:) Good job.

I do agree with ernyoka1 that her eyes are in too much shadow. One of the little tricks I do is place a low intensity spot light and use the "point at" command so it's directed at the head. That way you can hightlight her face just a little bit more.

Good work, and I hope to see more!

~ brent ~