ncjyro opened this issue on Jan 31, 2003 ยท 12 posts
jstro posted Sat, 01 February 2003 at 9:04 AM
Nice scene. I think the trees are too white. I might loose the tree on the right, just to make it a bit more asymetrical, and maybe add something flying in the air (a dragonfly close up or a bird in the distance - or maybe a snake swimming with it's nose just out of the water) to add a bit of interest. But I think it is fine, overall. jon
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