hi, i hope you'll forgive the presumption, i had a fiddle with the image in paintshop to illustrate my suggestions. i saw it as a sunset/early dawn image. personally i think the content is complete and just some adjustment of the lighting would give the required affect. i think you have a good idea here and will love to see the final image.

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