The Auaura should be sharper I think and the horizon is just not right. The icebergs are great but need to be near vertical in places. The general atmosphere(feeling) is great....brrr cold and the sea is terrific! If anything I would add loads more ice in the form of what are called 'growlers', little icebergs, mostly submerged. The Bryster

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...