Okay, a very hard choice... I can go only by my personal taste, and really there are some pieces I like very much, even if for different reasons... The piece I like better is jstro's piece (I'm very willing to read the whole novel), but I have some difficulties in feeling the difference between the two scenes, maybe just because of my difficulties with the language... Inexplicably enough, I find a the even more subtle difference in ChuckEvans' entry very intriguing... So, considering the theme of the challenge, I think I'll go with: CHUCKEVANS!