Looks good. Just adjust the stuff in the background, like the other folks said. The figure in the foreground looks great. Maybe add some bumps and roughness to the suit. As for the red eye idea, the guy is unemployed and is unhappy. Want to go with showing a feeling of helplessness. The metal stuff in the foreground, should be more rusty and pitted looking. The other thing is, if you have been staring at the picture for 2 days, do this. Walk away and don't look at it for a few days and see what ideas you get. Don't be in such a hurry to rush it out unless you are on a deadline.