Forum: Bryce


Subject: Critique Time :)

Colette1 opened this issue on Mar 03, 2003 ยท 8 posts


draculaz posted Tue, 04 March 2003 at 12:52 AM

it's very cartoony, your attention to detail is pretty good, and by that I mean the egg yolk or whatever the fluid that is... the fact the wings of the baby dragon haven't matured, etc. one thing that i would suggest if i may would be to look more into the textures. the haze right now makes the ground level dissapear, almost as if the eggs would be in the air. also the texture on the rocks and ground in general could use a little work -in the sense of making the texture more depth-persistant. The texture on the eggs could be a bit dirtier, considering that the eggs have been in the dirt for a while -or just maybe because dragons don't lay eggs that white :P also, the eggs could be a bit smaller because there's no way a dragon that small could make eggs that big. but yeah, aside from that... good :) Drac