tjames opened this issue on Mar 04, 2003 ยท 38 posts
tjames posted Wed, 05 March 2003 at 10:43 AM
A little short Jon...You've got the eight lines on the complaint, but only one one the volta and your summary couplet. You don't have to write about wind.. the gig is on change. The six lines in the volta are the main course here, so go ahead and give it another go. I've got to write a model here methinks...BTW the thread closes 1730 est March 31 and since that's April 1st for all you Europeans, I'm not foolin'