Nice texuring so far, but...you knew there would be one...he looks a little too puffy. Think DEATH and DECAY! The skin seems like it should stretch over the bones. Take a look at some roadkill sometime, especially a few day old carcass. There may bee some bloat, but that would be in the abdomen. There would be little sign of muscle due to the lack of blood flowing into it. The color scheme is pretty good, depending on where this guy has been laying around. Rotting brown, mildew green, bloodless flesh, all wonderful colors! His nose is accurate, but he has too much lip. Think more boney/emaciated, more muscle tone, but less muscle. Try to imagine the skin without that layer of body fat below, and somewhat stretched and dehydrated. A good visual may be rotting fruits and or vegetables. I think you are definately on the right track, I see too little dead things around here. Hope I'm not being too critical, nice work. Mark