Hi Charmz, welcome to the forum (I got in first!) I liked the sense your poem gave me at the end, of returning to warmth and home, after flying free across a freezing wilderness. (that's how I saw it anyway) Had a bit of trouble reading the poem though, all the lines seemed to be cut in half. I personally don't follow the rules because I don't know them, but some of our more experienced poets will be along soon & I'm sure they'll help you out. You mentioned chocolate.....as long as you're prepared to share, you'll do well here! Shanna :-) Bad at poetry, but much much worse at jokes.