Hey Charmz, I'm really glad you are posting here, cos I like your stuff. This one really hooked me, because I could identify with the character, although not from the point they seem to be writing from (they have been left/have themselves left) I particularly like the 'sometimes' perspective, it gives me a sense that time has passed since they parted ways, and makes it wistful, I like my poetry to be wistful. Shutting up now. Shanna :-) who always wants more to read. wants more.