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-Klaus, if you want to post here to improve your writing skills, including verse, that is fine. Using this forum for political debates is not the purpose of this forum. That's what the OT Forum is for. Posts created for the sole purpose of political debates will be bumped to the proper forum. They've been bumped from other forums as well. My first suggestion would be to run your song through an English spell checker. There are a lot of misspellings in the translation. It's difficult to say whether some words are mistranslated, misspelled, or aren't meant to be translated (they're just sounds.)