Thank you. I usually don't write in a repetitive style. I just did this time. I made all the repetition to show his (my????) desperation and the...what's the word I am looking for...intensity of his feelings. Kind of like he was breaking down. Also it was supposed to be sort of like an epiphany, where he stops and realises all of these things for the first time, and he is so shocked that he can't really function at a normal level, his thoughts are just primative. Hence the primative sentances, repetition etc. But thank you for the feedback :-) Alex