There's nothing wrong with this picture. Its heart and soul is the feeling of what is going to happen/what is happening. It totally tells the story and that's all that's needed here. Anything else is just nitpicking. I love the idea of making a car out of metaballs! By the way, it's nice to see someone depicting the place where the Brits regularly thrashed the US at speed challenges!!!!! The Bryster

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...