This shows a lot of progress over the first posting. It's gotten down to pretty much a matter of individual preferences at this point. My suggestions would include things like: I think the pants "scoop" too low in front, they'd look better either higher in front, or with a contoured belt (similar to a wight-lifters, but a bit more subtle) that comes higher across the back. I think a belt or pair of shoulder-loops would be necessary to support the sword anyway. She looks too busty to be going into action unsupported. I'd consider adding shoulder-straps to the top (like a "sports bra"). I'd add some folds and creases to the pants texture behind the knees On the face, I'd think a more prominent nose would add something as well, but I'd also suggest more aggressive eyebrow contours (sharper peaks - something like Adrianne Barbeau (SP) or Kirsty Alley). The Makeup again is a matter of personal taste, but I'd think a touch less, and consider adding the "covert opps" smudges under the eyes to imply a trained assault (depends on the scenes you're doing, of course, but the overall impression is she's not heading for tea with her literature club :-)). Boots are looking very good. (Possibly add a knife sheath strapped on a calf?) Depending on the scenes you'll be doing, consider adding "camouflage" stripes or patches to the exposed skin areas (like Conan wore while attacking in one of the 2 movies). Again - these are all a question of personal preference, and your personal vision for the character should prevail. Just my two cents worth.... Cheers!