Forum: Writers


Subject: A Picture

Charmz opened this issue on Mar 26, 2003 ยท 5 posts


mysteri posted Wed, 26 March 2003 at 1:13 PM

Great stuff. Susurrus! What a way to start a poem. On first take, "Footprints in the sand" struck me as trite because of the poem of that title. But the next line countered that feeling completely.