Forum: Bryce


Subject: Calm Before The Storm(WIP)

Hawkfyr opened this issue on May 21, 2000 ยท 5 posts


Art posted Mon, 22 May 2000 at 7:45 PM

Hawk, Since you asked for comments and since we are friends, this is just an observation: Way too many stars in the night sky. Based on the perspective plane of the wagon, your lake should be much lower. The smaller trees look too...flat or 2D and should appear darker in color. Cover on the wagon seems odd with straight sides and somewhat too tall. Also, most used canvas for the cover. I see the leaf springs for the wagon seat, but can't make out the odd seat details. At this point, I'm supposed to say, "Other than that, there's nothing wrong." Heh! Great job on the campfire and lantern too. I don't mean to sound nit picky about this but again, you did ask for comments. You do have a great start. Still Friends??