Oh my. I had no idea you were using an actual point system. Do you have a copy of the system you might post or send me, so I understand what's going on a little better? I'm sorry. I had no idea. . . I write poetry quite a bit, but very rarely ever in full rhyming form; as I said I was just messing around with this. Could you entirely disregard the rhyming part of the point system for this? Would you prefer I take it down? Or, if you'd like, you could just chuck mine out entirely this time around, especially since I'm new on here; haven't yet earned my keep, that sort of thing? Not intending to cause quite such a mess, Lu