Lol, It was just a bit of it, I am trying to add more to it, thanks. Also about the "mind waking up" part, it wasn't about not paying attention. The mindset of the person in the poem is that they are so happy it doesn't seem that they are in "our" world, and when they have to say goodbye it is like being thrown back into horrible reality. So it's like you didn't have to think being around that person. Alex "should have elaborated, thank's for the feedback"