Okay, I've been trying to think of a way to say this that doesn't sound stupid, but I can't, so I'll say it the stupid sounding way :-) I really liked the fact that your poem was about a modern city, at a fixed point in time, able to be dated etc... with it's neon lights and tvs. It's so much easier to write about more timeless things, human interaction, emotional states and so on. I like the sense of atmosphere this creates for me as I read it, it reminds me why I moved out of London, but gives me a sense of why I keep going back to visit :-) Shanna :-)