Forum: Writers


Subject: My Girlfriend

mafenther opened this issue on Apr 01, 2003 ยท 5 posts


lavender posted Wed, 02 April 2003 at 5:44 PM

I'm glad that you seem to have a good thing going with your girlfriend, but I was disapointed that I got no sense of what either you or your girlfriend was like from the poem. The bit about the liver, however, was delightfully unexpected. :)