I'd be glad to receive critics too... I know that my words or my phrasing are weird, but I'd really like to know how to better my English... While voting ChuckEvans said: "I always make allowances for your words 'cause I know you are working in a different language. So, I didn't let that detract from your story." I'm aware that there is something that could detract from the story, after all... And I'd really like to know what it is, without your help I cannot figure out... I'm sorry that this help can be only one sided, 'cause I surely cannot give advices, and my critics cannot go deeper than "I like (or I don't like) it"... But if you need something about Italy... well just ask!