(why do I DO these things???) Rather than discuss each portion that I have an idea for improvement about, I'd just offer these subtle changes in this emotional poem: -------------------------------- If I just hold him right now And wrap my arms around him And close my eyes And take a deep breath. Maybe time will stand still. Then maybe this moment will never go, never end, never fade. And he will never have to pull away And smile And go. Just maybe. -------------------------- You can see I have only made a few suggestions. Please don't be upset that I re-wrote it...it was just easier to do suggestions this way. Let us know when the image is ready!