Okay.. I'm not upset. :) Some of your ideas are good.. I see what you did there with punctuation. But I'm not sure it works for me. How about this: If I just hold him right now And wrap my arms around him And close my eyes And take a deep breath- Maybe time will stand still, And this moment will never go, never end, never fade, And he will never have to pull away, And smile, And Go. Better/worse?... Am I working way tooooo much on it by now? :)