Forum: Writers


Subject: Need help with a poem and English :)

A_ opened this issue on Apr 03, 2003 ยท 15 posts


Shoshanna posted Mon, 07 April 2003 at 5:56 PM

I like it better this way although I'm not too keen on the time stands still line (that's just me) When all's said and done, it's your work. You need to be as happy with it as you can be, so I'm wondering why you aren't sure if it works for you? Shanna :-)