It's turning out beautifully :) You just need to stare at something else for a bit to 'refresh' your eyes! The only thing I'd change is on the body--freckles tend to be clustered on the upper-most parts of the body, the ones that are exposed to the most UV rays. I'm pale-skinned and most of mine are on the upper parts of my forearms, the tops of my shoulders and the 'V' below my neck on my upper chest, where a shirt opens up. And they're randomly spaced rather than evenly...like the ones on her nose and cheeks, which you did a very realistic job on :)