looks like a bryce background... Try tilting her head just a wee bit as us women always do that so no double chin will happen (when camera comes towards me - I bend a bit to left and thrust chin up and out...). Love the conforming on the bikini top but either right forearm is twisted 2 much or like dberryart said might need to be unbent a bit. Try putting in depth so that the water and sky don't overshadow the character 2 much. For first "real attempt" - all I can say is I cant wait for your next one!