its pretty good Shoshanna. It is a bit big hehe . I think the ghosty images are to close to the main guy and way to big . I can think of a few things i would try. Make them smaller and over his head to the right. Me i would use the image as a picture in a frame and put it in his hand . like a 8 X 10 size . Then i would make a ghosty image of her like a amgle reaching out and laying her hand on his shoulder or something . Make her fairly hard to see not to crisp and lots of glowy light. But still transparent.