I think maybe the lighting is too strong on her face and the right side of her body, you could turn it down a little. What settings are you using for the lighting? Is that tears of blood?, to be honest I don't like it 'cos it looks wrong somehow, maybe there's too much of it. You could perhaps put another suit of armour lying down in the mud behind her to make it look like a fallen comrade, that would also explain the other sword. Would love to see where you go with it 'cos it is a really wonderful scene and wonderful atmosphere. Good luck with whatever you decide to do. Catlin