i love the harsh lighting... maybe we need a hint of something flashing off-camera, left side. a few highlighting on the ground in front of her and maybe a bit of a white wash on the left side of the frame. i mean if your going with that harsh, dramatic effect on her, it screams for something casting it. pull the surroundings in. she looks like she just finished a fight(s) and has reached a point of no return... like she fought to get there... the prize perhaps. i love the blood.. maybe add a small string? like a droplet is clinging on in her motion.... i dont know how your doing the rain but can it be tilted in some way? make it look more like its comming 'down' mnore into the camera rather than across it... considering the pov? cant wait to see your next version, man. well done! :)