I don't know what she was looking for. The second one to me is fine. Since this was shot in B/W AND she wanted prints I am assuming you used film. If so...and I have no idea how good you are. You might want to increase the contrast a bit more. If this is digital. Well you can doo all sorts of things! Since the second photo was my favorite. ( Personally I like underwear adds. ) I think you could clone out the white pocket of the pants to make things look more interesting and/or les distracting. I probably would clone out the pattern on the undies too. But that is me regarding the pattern. The first I think I would crop a bit more off. The thired I think you cropped too much. BUT you know me and cropping. I don't like to eliminate body parts! But the second one really is cool. Bsteph