tjames opened this issue on May 04, 2003 ยท 26 posts
tjames posted Mon, 05 May 2003 at 9:52 PM
Caledonia wanted to do some poetry about mothers and I thought the reflections on the cherry blossoms starting to show outside a lttle romance and youth sounds kind of like may to me. I've gotten close on innocents and romance L3 and L7 thats a fourth, there's a triplet in the norm at L9,L10 and L11 and I tried to hold a parallel structure. i still think it could use some work though