Welcome to the forum! It is a great shot. I love the natural light and how it curves just so. To express the eyes a bit more is difficult. However if the lighting is right and you can make them the brightest point in the image, well then you will have the image to match the title. This image I would have named he feels pain. I see more than the eyes in pain. I see a man how is hurting. I wouldn't have guessed physical pain though, I would have thought it more emotional. Any way you look at it, it is a very good shot. Magick Michael