This image has improved a lot. The boat is a good idea and so are the ripples. You can get away with putting the ripples anywhere in the pond because fish often feed or come to the surface making ripples an so on...It's little touches like this that make an image come to life...I still think a bird or two is needed.0.2p

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...