Forum: Writers


Subject: Shine On

mythicaldamienne opened this issue on May 14, 2003 ยท 11 posts


A_ posted Wed, 14 May 2003 at 10:17 AM

Hmm, a very powerful poem. My heart truely missed a beat in the section where you described the "winter" part, it's so vivid and the emotions are so strong. A really sharp, straight to the heart description of that particular moment. And I did love the ending, the spring - life carries on - and the last two lines. I really loved this poem. So sorry you lost him.