If we say that the whole twister looks like a mushroom, then the top of the mushroom should perhaps be expanded to fill the whole frame at that level. Then perhaps a road/highway nearby with cars etc. Looking great so far....

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...