Forum: Writers


Subject: Vagrancy

Charmz opened this issue on May 14, 2003 ยท 6 posts


Charmz posted Sat, 17 May 2003 at 7:38 AM

I also just realized a spelling error, in line 7 eternally should have read.. and now reads, eternal. Thanks very much for all the comments! Dissonance; your words mean nothing, only noises that you make in vain attempt to placate and mislead. Resonance; the echo seemingly eternal along the void where once dwelt happiness and love. Permanence; that thing you promised but could/would not deliver i have found within myself. Distance; all that remains between me and thee, after everything has been said and done. I believe that I am pleased with this one now!