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Well.... this is a REPOST since last one didn't show up. Let's see if I can remember... The overall of the video feels too "gamelike" for my taste. The explosions and optics remind me of games such as Descent and Homeworld. Although those work nicely in a game it doesn't work that well for general computer graphics (unless that's the look you are after). Second. I'd like it to be a little faster. The cars move sort of slowly and if they are flying they should fly faster. That would certainly add more "speed feeling" and "cool factor". Remember the Coruscant chase in EP 2? That's what I mean. You say this is the intro for your reel? The video feels like a complete reel altogether (it's too long for an intro). The presentation is nice but it would work better if you put it on the beginning of the video. Only something to keep in mind: this video is focused on what exactly? That may help you to think on what to focus.

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