I like this so far; it's really, really good! Other than some of the suggestions already given, the only thing I can think of is I'd like to see this scene from higher up -- as though I was one of the people leaning out the window to watch the activity going by. Or maybe more of the effect of looking out through a doorway? I don't know...something that makes me feel like I'm really in the scene. Great job, Flak. Impressive as always!