Ianfe opened this issue on Jun 07, 2003 ยท 4 posts
Crescent posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 10:52 AM
This is very bittersweet poem. I can't decide if you're trying to end the poem in a slightly more upbeat manner - do what you can before everything is gong - but it comes across with a soft melancholy that I like. Gee, my classes never inspired me this way. ;-)