mythicaldamienne opened this issue on Jun 15, 2003 ยท 6 posts
tjames posted Tue, 17 June 2003 at 9:35 AM
The emphasis was on the two lines "The rider comes" and "The arrival". I think they were repeated enough that the balance was not thrown off. I wonder though if a greater anticipation would have been acheived by putting less weight on the arrival and leaving that til the end?