The mouth is extreme, even for a 3-months-old baby sucking on a bottle. With 30-year-old eyes, it jars. If you are going for the childish look, the eyes need to be larger and rounder, with more space under the brows. If you want a woman of an age to wear make-up, the mouth needs to be reshaped to reflect her maturity. A little discontinuity adds interest in a face (perfection is boring). However, that shouldn't be what a person notices. Carolly