PhanthomNinja didn't like being put on the spot like that, but if its any help I was looking for a 10 syllable opening and closing line that rhymed seperated by as many non-rhyming lines sevcn syllable lines as possible. I'm not supposed to give the challenge away its supposed to be found in the clues given in the sample that way it makes it easier for me to tell if the poem is well fit or not.